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Friday, 8 May 2020

Animal Town

 I am a wolverine. I work in Animal Town. I am the policeman but I'm actually an animal. Grizzly is my best friend aka Scott. I eat dead carcasses. My house is made out of wood. Grizzly lives quite close to me. When we were young we used to play catch the pieces of wood. One time a person visited, I nearly scratched them but Grizzly ran away and then he just came charging so everyone just ran. My house is full up with heaps of pieces of wood and carcasses. I love climbing on the wood. One of my friends works for the army. He's a black panther. I am a policeman. I've arrested 100 people, so has Grizzly. Tonight we are working the night shift and it is so much fun. We grabbed some food out of the fridge. I grabbed whip cream, Grizzly grabbed honey and one of my other friends, who is  a surgeon. Me and Grizzly took a walk in the park, it was a 2 hour walk. My legs were sore so were Grizzlies then we both went home. I watered the garden and gave my pet human a pat. He talked. I didn't know what he said. I said, “Talk to me in Wolverine.” Then I went to sleep and it was a nice sleep.

4 comments:

  1. I love your writing is Hunter

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  2. Well done putting this story on your blog, Hunter. As you know, I think this is fun story. Good to see that you're using dialogue.

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  3. It is great to see you have writing on your blog Hunter. Tino pai rawa! i think I like Scott in human form better!

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  4. Your story is good. I really liked it. It was very funny! I like animals too. You should make another part to animal town.

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